What Life should feel like

Warm soft petals

fall from the orange scented sky

Our feelings swirl into a vat of overwhelming joy
as we begin our journey,
hand in hand,

The warm wind gently blows at our backs,
telling us "it's okay"

with a smile you turn to me

and we leap

into the wonderful unknown

Comments

:O

It's nice, but would be better with correct grammer. FF I'm so picky..

thankies! ^ ^

I tried to fix it up, sorry I don't notice these things...

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